Dynamic Poetry · The Old Pond · two-letter drift

The Old Pond, One Night

Dusk to dawn and round again. The moon comes down into the water, a crow takes the morning, and by daylight the pond is itself. Read again from the top.


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One or two letters change in one word at each step, and every version keeps the 5–7–5 of the original and reads as a sentence someone could mean. The last version leads straight back into the first.